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"Such a wonderful day~"Alex said as she sat at her desk in her bedroom.She was writing down names in a notebook,nobody knew this but this notebook had her murder list in it."So the detective's real name is Andrew?Well I never knew that before until I first met him....."She said as she kept writing names,suddenly the door to her room began to open.She quickly hid the notebook behind her desk to keep it hidden."Miss Alex I came here to tell you that you have a visitor."Said an old voice."The voice came from a male that looked the age of 50,he had short grey hair and dull yellow eyes.He wore a black business suit and brown work shoes."Ah,okay well i'll go answer it my dear butler!"Alex said as she got up and ran past him.Alex rand down the stairs,which were very long after all she lived in a mansion.She stopped at the door and opened it up,the person who was standing there was.......Raide?! 'What is he doing here?!'Alex thought to herself in abit of shock."Hello m-miss Alex!I was wondering something if you would.......naw you wouldn't"Raide said to her,his cheeks seemed very red."What is it?"Alex asked in abit of confused voice."Well will.........will you.......Will you go on a Date with Me?!"Raide finally said to her,his face was completly red now."Sure."Alex said in a happy voice,Raide bowed before Alex and said "Thank you very much!".The both of them then walked outside and past the mansion gates."So where do you wanna go?"Raide asked Alex as they kept walking."You decide okay Mr...."Alex said but she didn't know his name unfortunatly."Call me Raide okay miss."He said to her as they kept walking.Raide stopped at a fancy-looking resturant.They both walked inside and looked for a place to sit,they finally decide to sit beside a window."So why did you want me to go on a date with you?"Alex asked Raide as they both sat down at their table."Well you just looked so beautiful and i'm sorry for earlier!"Raide said,he felt quite sorry for saying that to her.Alex was thinking of something as they both sat,but she would say what was on her mind.....
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Well here's Chapter 3 and it has too much......TALKINGGGGG!!!!!Also it seems Raide has a little crush on Alex. :D
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Me: Oooooooh....... X3

Moon: Finally, some romance.
Me:Yep there's romance!Also back in the last chapter the reason why Raide doesn't like the sight of dead bodies is because his mother and father(who were both very nice people) died when he was young.

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I am one the toughest egg to crack!!!!Wait a minute......i'm not an egg!
Moon: I can understand... I'm just not a fan or any kind of parent, you know... With what my mummy and poppy did to me. *gestures to her scars*

Me: GO READ MY NEW CHAPTER, JUST DUN GET MAD!
Me:He's the kind of guy who can break down easily in serious situations you know?

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I am one the toughest egg to crack!!!!Wait a minute......i'm not an egg!
Moon: *nods, then says to me* You're a bastard; your mum and dad had you before they were married.

Me: *shrugs* Your point?

Moon: And then your father died when you were eight.

Me: Meh.

Moon: And your Uncle Chet died yesterday on Mother's Day due to cancer.

Me: I never knew him, anyways.

Moon: I'm afraid to be a teacher.

Me: I'm afraid to go to school after the shooting in Virginia. *starts crying* Those poors teenagers!

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